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• Artiste: Asyndess
• Titre: Une Etoile Disparait
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After the miraculous birth by the lighting of the flame (darkness became less total) We could guess a favourable wind (which always blew embers to further and nicer horizons) (And the flame oddly flickered like an invisible and growing unease) Around the candle which decreased men fought with an outburst of savagery which made the flame more delicate (believing it immortal they continued their fatal fight) and the flame faded away like an irreversible death over life When a failed but invincible offspring thoughtlessly destroyed the light of its awakening this led to the passing from tops to depths! A star disappears A star disappears in the dark I see a flame fading